The Gray Bunny (graybunny) wrote,
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Strip #6

Thursday's Newtworks is up. I've already been told that this strip is pretty text-heavy, and it is, and that's after compressing the dialogue much more than I really wanted to.

Having trouble with pacing. How fast should the comic move? I have no idea. The plans I have for the next two weeks could probably be expanded to last for two months instead. How do I tell what's too fast or too slow? One cure for text-heavy strips is to add panels, but maybe that's just treating the symptom? Maybe I'm trying to pack too much plot into one strip?

Please bear with me. I'm still trying to figure out what I'm doing here.
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